Request review of device tree documentation

[Grant Likely]

On Thu, Aug 05, 2010 at 02:43:25PM +1000, David Gibson wrote:
> On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 04:59:46PM -0600, Grant Likely wrote:
> > I've been doing a bit of work on some introductory level documentation
> > of the flattened device tree.  I've got a rough copy up on the
> > devicetree.org wiki, and I could use some feedback.  If anyone has
> > some time to look at it, you can find it here:
> > 
> > http://devicetree.org/Device_Tree_Usage
> 
> Sorry I haven't replied sooner, I've been away, then sick and
> generally preoccupied.  Still here are some comments now.

Thanks David.  Reworked as per comments.  You can see the diff here:

http://www.devicetree.org/mediawiki/index.php?title=Device_Tree_Usage&diff=228&oldid=227

g.

> 
> How Addressing Works:
> 
>  * Small inconsistency you use "address1", "address2" then "unit-address3".
> 
>  * Perhaps re-emphasise that a parent's #*-cells properties govern the
>    children's reg properties, not its own, since this is a common
>    misunderstanding..
> 
> Non Memory Mapped Devices:
> 
>  * Your phrasing here suggests that non-memory-maped == zero
>    size-cells, which is not always true.
> 
> Ranges (Address Translation):
> 
>  * Third paragraph, first sentence is a grammatical dogs' breakfast,
> 
> How Interrupts Work:
> 
>  * Bogus paragraph break partway through first sentence.
> 
>  * At the end you say the second cell indicates the interrupt's
>    polarity, but you don't specify how this is encoded.  It might be
>    worth emphasising that while most interrupt specifiers do include
>    trigger and polarity type information, the encoding of it can and
>    does vary between interrupt controllers.
> 
> Advanced Sample Machine:
> 
>  * The unit address in the name shouldn't have a "0x" prefix
> 
> Advanced Interrupt Mapping:
> 
>  * Perhaps worth noting that while a PCI *card* will use INTA..INTD,
>    on-board PCI devices can, and frequently do, have interrupts wired
>    side-band to the PCI bus, directly to the main interrupt
>    controller.
> 
>  * In your example, you're muddying the waters of your previous usage
>    of interrupt-parent.  The PCI child nodes have the PCI top-level
>    node as their implicit interrupt parent, because its their first
>    ancestor with an interrupt-map, and we hit that before the
>    interrupt-parent property specified at the very top level.  This
>    means amongst other things that if there are PCI devices with
>    seperately wired interrupts, they must explicitly set
>    interrupt-parent to bypass the normal PCI interrupt mapping.
> 
> 
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